This week, we received a letter from Eleanor begging her eyebrows to come back but it was incomplete. Luckily Vincent managed to finish the letter using fronted adverbials and conjunctions.
Dear
Eyebrows,
With desperation,
I am writing to you both because I realise that I have made a terrible mistake.
Every night, I have been tossing and turning because I have been feeling so
incredibly lonely without you gently resting on my face. After you read this, I
hope you will come back to me. I beg you!
Everywhere I
look, I see wonderful unique and interesting eyebrows. On a daily basis, I am
struggling to express my emotions.
Again and
again, people run away from me because they see the empty space above my eyes.
Annoyingly,
at dinner I can’t show disgust therefore my mum piles broccoli on my plate.
At school,
people make fun of me as a result I run and hide.
Finally, all
that is left to say is that I love you, I miss you and I want you to come home.
Lovingly,
Eleanor xxxxx
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