Victor Frankenstein by Vincent.
Victor, who was quite tired, had piercing electric blue eyes
and a determined expression on his deathly pale face. He had books on death and
illnesses under his arm. Victor walked with a small limp back from the library.
He wore a thin, burnt ash black coat, which was several sizes too big and his
hair, which hung lifelessly on his shoulders was lank and unkempt. Victor was
still devastated about his mother’s death and this showed on his skeletal face.
Victor Frankenstein by Jake
Victor’s raven, shoulder length hair hung limply around his
exhausted face. His swallow tailed long coat moved in the breeze as he hurried
back from the library. Victor, who had skeletal, sallow skin, was lacking sleep
due to the long hours he spent in his laboratory. Inspired by his mother’s
passing, his electric blue eyes desperately searched through his books in order
to find the cure for death.
Excellent written pieces Jake and Vincent. A good use of descriptive language.
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